Descriptive Sentence Writing Week 2

Descriptive Sentence

WALT: write a descriptive paragraph , use a variety of descriptive words to make my writing interesting

Here are two of my sentences:

Nikau Palm seed germinate in Autumn and Winter. This is the things that hang off the heart/shell. The colour of the seeds are a tan colour. Sometimes the seeds are with flowers, that are usually pink.

At the top of the trees are very big spiky leaves, that are all shades of green, most of the time they are dark green. When the leaves have died they fall off and you can see and touch them.