I really like the way you have used paragraphs to organise your ideas. I can see that in your first paragraph, you describe what The Lion's Cage is about. In the second paragraph you share your own opinion about The Lion's Cage. It is very impressive that you can already use paragraphs so well. Maybe you could think about adding the link to The Lion's Cage so that people who view your blog post will be able to enjoy watching it too.
I enjoyed watching the silent film too. I think the actor, Charlie Chaplin did a great job using his facial expressions and body language to tell the story.
What was the most recent movie you watched? What was it about and did you enjoy it?
Kia ora Millah,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have used paragraphs to organise your ideas. I can see that in your first paragraph, you describe what The Lion's Cage is about. In the second paragraph you share your own opinion about The Lion's Cage. It is very impressive that you can already use paragraphs so well. Maybe you could think about adding the link to The Lion's Cage so that people who view your blog post will be able to enjoy watching it too.
I enjoyed watching the silent film too. I think the actor, Charlie Chaplin did a great job using his facial expressions and body language to tell the story.
What was the most recent movie you watched? What was it about and did you enjoy it?
Keep up the great blogging!
Noho ora mai,
Emiely :)