Friday 3 August 2018
My Treasure
#1 W.A.L.T: Use conjunctions to join our ideas together.
#2 W.A.L.T: Include descriptive detail.
This writing went good and it was also fun.
This task was ... Fun and a interesting way to describe your favourite teddy or thing.
I found this task a bit easy because you had to make sure you has some FANBOYS and
lots of describing words.
How I went with the W.A.L.T ... I think I did okay after going back about 3 times. The FANBOYS I used are, and & but
How many FANBOYS can you find in my writing?
F = For
A = And
N = Nor
B = But
O = Or
Y = Yet
S = So
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Kia Ora Millah, I really like your post on your treasure. You have descibed him really well. Maybe next time you could check for some grammer mistakes before you post it. But other that tht you have show the reader how much you love piglet. Noho Ora Mai. From Honor.
ReplyDeleteHello Millah,
ReplyDeleteThis is an AMAZING blogpost! I like how you have added photos and colour to make your presentation appealing!
Your description on your special thing is amazing. I can know picture what your special thing looks like in my head.
Katelynn,
Totara 2
Kia ora Millah. I Love the way you have presented your slide. I really enjoyed reading your presentation you description on piglet was really good. Kai pai
ReplyDeleteKia ora Millah. I Love the way you have presented your slide. I really enjoyed reading your presentation you description on piglet was really good. Kai pai
ReplyDeleteBula Millah, I found your post very descriptive and colorful you really have made your quality the only thing is that next time you could add a photo of your Piglet and fix your spelling and grammar.
ReplyDeletee nge!
Ruby
Kia Ora Millah!
ReplyDeleteIts Ella here form T3. I really like your descriptive writing about piglet! When I was in Mamaku I can remember using fanboys in my writing.Its awesome that you have had piglet since you were born!
Ka Pai! From Ella.
Hi Millah.
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading this. You presented your work very well. You also did a great job at describing your character.In term 1 I had to do something similar as we were writing acrostic poems. Why did you choose this character? What was your favourite part about doing this activity?
Bye.