This is a great piece of creative writing. I am so pleased that that is all it is. As this would be the most terrible thing to have to go through. Imagine if this was actually a reality. It would be so sad. It would just effect so many things, animals, plants and humans.
Lets hope that we never have to experience any of this. Remember to comment on other students blog leaving them a thoughtful comment. You can find other students that also doing the Summer Learning Journey like yourself on the twitter feed. Her is the link if your not sure. https://sites.google.com/a/manaiakalani.org/connected-learners-share/sljtwitterfeeds
All the comments are worth two points as long as they are at least three sentences long and about the post.
Thanks for the comment!! Thank you for all the kind and positive things you said in the comment. I also hope that we don't get hit by an acid rain, that would be terrible. I would have to let Blue come inside (He will have to go toilet inside, YUCK) so he doesn't drink any acid rain and die. I have looked at twitter feed and saw some other cool SLJ posts. I am going to write some comments on their blogs after I have finished replying.
Hi Millah
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of creative writing. I am so pleased that that is all it is. As this would be the most terrible thing to have to go through. Imagine if this was actually a reality. It would be so sad. It would just effect so many things, animals, plants and humans.
Lets hope that we never have to experience any of this.
Remember to comment on other students blog leaving them a thoughtful comment. You can find other students that also doing the Summer Learning Journey like yourself on the twitter feed. Her is the link if your not sure.
https://sites.google.com/a/manaiakalani.org/connected-learners-share/sljtwitterfeeds
All the comments are worth two points as long as they are at least three sentences long and about the post.
Good work Millah
Until next time
Allie :)
Ola Allie
DeleteThanks for the comment!!
Thank you for all the kind and positive things you said in the comment. I also hope that we don't get hit by an acid rain, that would be terrible. I would have to let Blue come inside (He will have to go toilet inside, YUCK) so he doesn't drink any acid rain and die. I have looked at twitter feed and saw some other cool SLJ posts. I am going to write some comments on their blogs after I have finished replying.
Millah xxx