I like how you have taken an original fairy tale and changed it, using different characters and outcomes. You might need to just explain that they were bad powers that Kevin was trying to give Aurora. I like how you have used lots of different punctuation in your writing.
Hi Millah
ReplyDeleteI like how you have taken an original fairy tale and changed it, using different characters and outcomes. You might need to just explain that they were bad powers that Kevin was trying to give Aurora. I like how you have used lots of different punctuation in your writing.
Love Mum