Is Niah from T4 I like how you write some writing about Aurora.But next time make sore you writing is a little bigger but otherwise it is good. Who is your fav princess?? bye.
I like how you have taken an original fairy tale and changed it, using different characters and outcomes. You might need to just explain that they were bad powers that Kevin was trying to give Aurora. I like how you have used lots of different punctuation in your writing.
Hello Millah
ReplyDeleteIs Niah from T4 I like how you write some writing about
Aurora.But next time make sore you writing is a little bigger but otherwise it is good. Who is your fav princess?? bye.
Hi Millah
ReplyDeleteI like how you have taken an original fairy tale and changed it, using different characters and outcomes. You might need to just explain that they were bad powers that Kevin was trying to give Aurora. I like how you have used lots of different punctuation in your writing.
Love Mum