Bula Millah. Reagan here. I really liked how you have added in colour and added in detailed descriptions. What time of book is this - chapter, picture, journal etc? Next time however, you could make your replies to the teachers sentences a different font (for example) so it is easier to understand. Other than that I really enjoyed the post and it really made me want to read it!
Hey Millah, have you enjoyed doing the School Journal reading rotations? I am impressed with how you manage your time and workload. You are very efficient. Good on you. Mrs Gully
Bula Millah. Reagan here.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you have added in colour and added in detailed descriptions.
What time of book is this - chapter, picture, journal etc?
Next time however, you could make your replies to the teachers sentences a different font (for example) so it is easier to understand.
Other than that I really enjoyed the post and it really made me want to read it!
Noho ora mai
Reagan
Hey Millah, have you enjoyed doing the School Journal reading rotations? I am impressed with how you manage your time and workload. You are very efficient. Good on you. Mrs Gully
ReplyDeleteHey Millah,i have enjoyed reading your story i am impressed of how you put this story out and write it,
ReplyDeletenice job
Thanks Dayton.
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog it really helps me. You comment was really helpful and kind.
Millah