Monday, 9 April 2018

Main Stars

4 comments:

  1. Hi Millah,
    It's Louisa from Ohaeawai Primary School. What is Main Stars? If it's a type of writing I like it. The writing is very interesting and descriptive.
    From Louisa

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  2. Kia ora Millah my name is Shannon from Ohaeawai Primary School. Your writing is cool.Eating it would be yum. I like your writing bye From Shannon.

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  3. Hi Millah,
    It's Cassidy from Ohaeawai Primary School. I hope you had a great picnic with your friends.
    from Cassidy

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  4. Hi Millah,
    My name is Ronan and I go to Ohaeawai Primary School. It sounds like it was fun and exciting. What did the mushroom look like? Your writing is great.
    From Ronan

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.