Monday 9 April 2018

Main Stars

6 comments:

  1. Hi Millah,
    It's Louisa from Ohaeawai Primary School. What is Main Stars? If it's a type of writing I like it. The writing is very interesting and descriptive.
    From Louisa

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  2. Kia ora Millah my name is Shannon from Ohaeawai Primary School. Your writing is cool.Eating it would be yum. I like your writing bye From Shannon.

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  3. Hi Millah,
    It's Cassidy from Ohaeawai Primary School. I hope you had a great picnic with your friends.
    from Cassidy

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  4. Hi Millah,
    My name is Ronan and I go to Ohaeawai Primary School. It sounds like it was fun and exciting. What did the mushroom look like? Your writing is great.
    From Ronan

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  5. Kia ora Millah, my name is Ryah and I go to the same school as you (Grey Main School. I like how you do all of your main star and try to get gold every year and you do get gold . Your picnic looks really cool . Did you make the cake all by yourself because it looks really good and yummy to eat ??? Maybe next time you could tell us a bit about the walk you went on. It looks a really fun walk to go on. How long did the walk go for? Thanks from Ryah .

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  6. Hello Millah,

    Looks like you has a wonderful time on your picnic! What was your favourite part? I like how you have added photos of you and Reagan.

    How long did it take you to make the MELTED ICE CREAM CAKE? It looks so cool! Did you make the cake by yourself or did you have some help?

    Maybe next time you could tell us where you went for your walk and how long it took!

    He Whetu koe!
    (Your a star)

    Katelynn,
    Totara 2, Grey Main School

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