Well done with your Hairy Maclary story it its just great. I really enjoyed reading it. I love that you have kept to the theme of the original story and made up some new characters. My favourite one is 'Everest Nail with a bunnies tail' I think that is very inventive. They certainly do go on a great adventure all the way from the park the lake to the snow. Well done it is really very good. This is another story that I am sure Lynley Dodd would enjoy reading and to see how creative you have been with this story. I also like that you have put a photo of all of the characters down the side so we can see what they look like.
Another great job Millah. Look forward to see what you do next.
Hi Millah
ReplyDeleteWell done with your Hairy Maclary story it its just great. I really enjoyed reading it. I love that you have kept to the theme of the original story and made up some new characters.
My favourite one is 'Everest Nail with a bunnies tail' I think that is very inventive.
They certainly do go on a great adventure all the way from the park the lake to the snow. Well done it is really very good.
This is another story that I am sure Lynley Dodd would enjoy reading and to see how creative you have been with this story.
I also like that you have put a photo of all of the characters down the side so we can see what they look like.
Another great job Millah. Look forward to see what you do next.
Until next time
Allie :)