This term we are writing a lots of peoms and then Miss Hines will bind them into a book for us to take home. This week we have been doing limercks. I have completed to of them and here is one of them. What is your favourite type of poem to write?
Kia ora Millah I enjoyed (well, actually a little bit grossed out!) to read your limerick. Hope you didn't base your poem around Freddie! You did make me laugh though which is a sign of a great writer. I really liked your Japan Man limerick, too. I enjoy writing rhyming poems. I hve written a few of these for people on special occassions. My 21st speech was a poem, too What type of poem are you going to have go at next? I think it is a great idea that you get to make a book full of your own poems. I am looking forward to reading them all!
This is a very interesting limerick that you have written. I had to read it twice to make sure I had read it correctly. It did make me laugh! The image that you have put with it was great too.
Well done and keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home!
Kia ora Millah
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed (well, actually a little bit grossed out!) to read your limerick. Hope you didn't base your poem around Freddie! You did make me laugh though which is a sign of a great writer. I really liked your Japan Man limerick, too. I enjoy writing rhyming poems. I hve written a few of these for people on special occassions. My 21st speech was a poem, too What type of poem are you going to have go at next? I think it is a great idea that you get to make a book full of your own poems. I am looking forward to reading them all!
Hi Millah
ReplyDeleteHope everything is going well in your bubble?
This is a very interesting limerick that you have written. I had to read it twice to make sure I had read it correctly.
It did make me laugh! The image that you have put with it was great too.
Well done and keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home!
Until next time
Mrs Costello :)